Hi Sam,
Thank you for your great comment and suggestions and more importantly your time. The article was not proofread. One of our Editorial has updated. the contents. I hope it makes better sense. Thank you.

You seem to have put lots of effort into this article but its really hard to read. It’s more like a poem or an essay from another century. I really tried to understand it but some parts I couldn’t. And I myself am studying computer science, so I’m no noob to the tech world.

Please don’t let my comment demotivate you, especially not if English is not your native language!! Just let someone proof read your articles before posting, as you clearly have put lots of effort into them and they are very good in content, just difficult to read.

Here only some examples:
– That mentioned, in some puts like sequential studying, this can be a little sooner, making a combined message of types.
– However those variations may well be for your favour in case you are on the lookout for an NMVe power of a particular capability, and Western Virtual is a logo you accept as true with.
– Smartly, it’s categorically now not sequential writing […]
– In comparison to the unique SN750 1TB design, the sequential studying is quicker, however the writing height is noticeably much less. In the event you use your NVMe SSD besides the OS, release apps and video games, then you may in finding the SE marginally sooner. Regardless that much less fascinating if you happen to ceaselessly carry out write operations.
– sequential studying = sequential reading??

Best,
Saam